WALT Write Adjectives

We have been learning to add  describing words to our stories 

to make them more interesting.

Here is a quick describing activity that we did in class.  

We got to choose what animal we wanted to write about.

We used TAGUL to make them into word clouds.

It was tricky to come up with describing words.  My friends in my group helped me with some of the words. I can try and use these words in my stories.

WALT Write a Cinquain Poem

WALT Write a Cinquain Poem

Cheese

Yellow, Tasty

Slice it, Grill it, Melt it

Cheese is tasty like ice-cream!

Milk

Yanni

Reflection:

"I like writing. I like writing about my own things like when we get free-choice.

I need to remember to put in capital letters and fullstops and not use "the"

all the time. Mrs Koroa wants me to write more sentences so my stories are longer

and they have more details."

WALT Choose Words to Make Our Writing More Interesting

The Moon is like a grey biscuit because it is round.

The Sun is like a fireball because it is fiery.

Yanni

Writing Reflection

I am learning to write a simile.

I am proud when I can write two or three similes.

My next step is to keep practising to write similes.

We Are Learning To Add Detail To Our Writing

Yanni's Reflection 

I like to write about going to the beach. 

Sometimes it is tricky to spell the words. 

When I get stuck I can use the word card. 

Acrostic poem

I am learning how to write an acrostic poem.  I know that I start each sentence with a letter of the subject.  I wrote about myself. 

I am learning to write a recount.

Fathers Day with Bunnings.https://spark.adobe.com/video/0IdUNvwhxKZqu

Yanni said, " I can put in lots of 'wow' words to make my story very good."

We are learning to write for an audience and publish quality work to share.

"I show my buddy my work. It is good,"

I am learning to write a story

I am learning to write more than than 2 sentences.

I am learning to start with a capital letter.

I am learning to read my story to see if it makes sense.

Yanni said, " I like my picture and I am good at finger spaces."

My Writing

Yanni, Wow! Your basic word recall has grown and with support you are beginning to use your alphabet sounds to spell longer words. You are learning to use finger spaces, capital letters and full stops in your writing and you always take care to present your work neatly. Well done!

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